Almost

• Artist: Quinothy
• Description: Again,
  I got kinda depressed. Wrote this one on,
  September 16, 2009.
  [ Yeah. I started to put dates on my poems. lol. ]
  Tell me what you think.
  :]
• Date: 09/28/2009
• Tags: almost

I take in a jagged breath,
As I steady my shaky hand,
The knife is waiting above my wrist,
Ready at my command.
As I press the blade against my skin,
My heart begins to race,
And then I see my reflection,
As tears stream down my face.
The knife clatters to the linoleum,
As I hang my head and cry,
Even though my heart is broken,
I Don't Want To Die.

Comments

[Digital_Porcelain_Heart]

Very emotional! Great job!

[darkslilprincess]

i like it alot......glad it has a good ending to it....

[invisibleninja159]

awesome poem!