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Falling downward
licked by fire
Full of life
yet so dead
Feel the cold breath
now with mire
keep the strife
no regrets in head
Weak are the dead
not for cries
the strong see our life
kept back by the end.
We are the leaves
tree stands higher
cut by the knife
and to the ground we fled.
- Title: Ending Note
- Artist: kamahaazi
- Description: I recently read some really cheesy autumn poetry, and so I decided to darken it up a bit. Please comment and check out my other work.
- Date: 09/24/2009
- Tags: ending note
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Rainbow cat FACE - 10/24/2009
- the rhythm is really good and the rhyming doesnt sound forced. good job n_n 5/5
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