Can you hear me?

• Artist: ReignOblytehria
• Description: This is a poem inspired by girls who have that one guy in thier life that never left even in hard times....
• Date: 09/22/2009
• Tags: hear

In the darkness she hides
Never showing her face as she cries
From time to time, she steps into the sunlight
Only to be humiliated ,then runs out of sight.

She cries out into the darkness to be held, but only cold winds answer her back
She cries out for the pain to stop, but the humiliation gets worse.
She cries out for love, and her own mother gives her hate
..........
I cry out for him, and he rushes to me with a kiss on my tearing face

Comments

[Poetic Progression]

I came here on your suggestion, I really loved reading this poem. It was moving, the imagery is clear, and I can totally feel the emotion behind this. Only thing I would do is fix the title - It's "Can you HEAR me?" I think you're trying to say.