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I'm lost in the dark,
looking for you.
I can't find my way out,
I need a clue.
My soul is on fire,
my heart is in hell
What can I do to get well?
I feel the pain
I feel the hurt
I want it to stop
But it wont work.
Alone and afraid,
lost in the dark
I can't see the light,
the Devil has my heart
I cry out for help,
but no one can hear
I cry inside as Death holds me near.
- by Killashranda |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/16/2009 |
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- Title: The lost love
- Artist: Killashranda
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- Date: 09/16/2009
- Tags: lost love
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Comments (4 Comments)
- tvkeshi - 02/28/2011
- one word... AMAZING
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- Killashranda - 09/16/2009
- thank you. this was a pretty hard time for me, i seem to write better with a lot of emotions inside me, this was a dark day in my life when i wrote this at work. lol things are much better now though.
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- XdarkAZNshadowX - 09/16/2009
- Great! Its totally my nature, the whole darkness thing. =D 5/5
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- Faerie - 09/16/2009
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Punctuate and Capitalize.
Other than that, its well written =)
Completely wonderful use of words - Report As Spam