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NOTHING goes according to plan, does it?
Though I sin,
fear drives me further into it.
All I can wish to do is get out,
out of all this mess and all this sh*t.
I quarantine myself,
afraid of the secret getting out.
Its hard to maintain hope,
when salvation is still a doubt.
I try to save myself again,
and reconstruct my heart.
But it's all useless,
and just ends up torn apart.
Even though I am in anger,
all of the sin tends to linger.
I hide my loathing,
by this devils plan.
For I know,
this was by my own hand.
It's time to give in,
because I know what I am.
Like the old song says:
"I feel like I was born,
for Devastation and Reform.
Destroying everything I love and the worst part is:
I pour my heart out, reconstruct,
but in the end its nothing but
a shell of what I had when I first started"
This is the story about my deception,
so I address this conflict with the uttermost attention.
- by 290DarkStars |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/12/2009 |
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- Title: Devastation & Reform
- Artist: 290DarkStars
- Description: This is an old one that I dug up while looking through some old notes... Based off of the song Devastation and Reform by RelientK... enjoy, and please comment... and dont rate unless you do.
- Date: 09/12/2009
- Tags: devastation reform
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Comments (5 Comments)
- 1so_so11rry_ari11 - 10/25/2009
- i like it ^_^ alot... like all your poems and short stories no suprise ^^".. it's funny because uhm i kind of turned it into a song abit if you dont mind xP
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- 290DarkStars - 09/15/2009
- well ^^ it is not old... but I just wanted to give a little bit of a dramatic twist to the words... hey, 'even or 'ell arnt words.. but they are cut back for heven and hell.. in poetry xD you just cant take it that literally ^^ but I absalutely can see your point. TY for commenting.
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- Dancing Armadillo Mage - 09/13/2009
- Very cool, I like the inconsistancy in stanza breaks and the feeling of honest confusion and pain without sounding over dramatized. My only complaint is the line, "it's like the old song says." I don't think that song is old enough to be a cultural adage. 4/5, please comment back smile
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- gamergirl25 - 09/13/2009
- AWESOME poem...
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- Daddy Got This Account - 09/12/2009
- aww, Dark, this is so good. i really really like it. you are an amazing poet, you really are. so i am giving you a 5/5 and i am favoriting. ^^
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