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Everyday Of My Life
Everyday of my life somethin's been malfunctioning in my head
Veins to my brain don't know what i said
Even though if you think i am smart
Right or wrong, still the same in my heart
You're the one that makes my life perfect
During school you're my favorite subject
Any day of my life i'll never let you down
You won't be alone 'cause i'll always be aroun'
Offering me other people i won't take
For me to be yours i'll do anything or make
Me and you are meant to be
You're the one, not her, not she
Life that i would wish for, is to be with you
If i ever lose you i wouldn't know what to do
Forevermore i'll stay true (because)
Eternal love is me and you
- Title: Everyday Of My Life
- Artist: VAS10
- Description: Welcome to my world
- Date: 09/11/2009
- Tags: everyday life
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Comments (2 Comments)
- x0StrawberryLemonade0x - 09/19/2009
- Bravo! Very, very nice. It has fluency, meaning, and it's not about hate. Much the opposite I shall say. That is a very nice change, because all you see in these arenas for the most part is all about hate, death, or is just so bad its not even worth rating (I have to admit I've sumbited a couple of these myself, though). 5/5 definately! Ooh and it looks very clean. Capitalization, punctuation, and space out nice! I've never been so exited for grammar!
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- Serenity_Ivey - 09/13/2009
- haha thats some world you got there
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