Why?

• Artist: Shijuku the Ebony Oddity
• Description: Dot dot dot.
  This is about the things that've happened in my life.
• Date: 08/22/2009
• Tags: spotlight sadness

Why?
Why much these things happen?
Why'd Daddy have to hit Mommy?
It was a long time until i heard of him.

"Daddy's...not coming home anymore."
"Why?"

Mommy cried.

Why?
Don't cry,Mommy....I still love you.

Why?
I saw a few disc things in Daddy's old drawers,said XXX....
I watched it,too.
The people were hugging and kissing and...Mommy told me not to say the rest.
Why,Mommy?

Why are the things so deformed?
Why am I so unnormal? Why is everything like this?

.....Why can't it just all stop?

...It stopped after I did it.
I jumped.
And now I can't feel anything.
Nothing at all.

Why?

Comments

[hotlissamissa]

i like it alot. it tellz a story i can relate to

[ProfessorKC]

Eh ... errr ... well ... still gotta say no.

Just a bunch of confused dialogue without being true dialogue about abuse and suicide. It lacks punch when you have to say everything outright and slap people in the face with a poem that contains next to know imagery. You need to let the reader create with you when they read a poem or read anything for that matter.

[lovesoua]

u made me cry now sad
move on and forget everything and u will be fin smile