Time

• Artist: Rain Man816
• Description: This is getting on my nerve please tell me what you think of the damn poem i seriously want to know, if you rate then tell me why you like it, or why not. IT WILL HELP ME!!!!!
• Date: 08/22/2009
• Tags: time world understand order balance

Time means nothing in our world
I simply is an extent of human imagination
That man has made up to create a certain order
Everthing is black and white
Color is only seen by humans as a way to create balance in an artisically based world
No decision is ever final
Everyone has doubts about everthing they decide
Even when they think they dont
Why am I speaking as I do
To make you understand
Nothing is true
Or as it seems
To uderstand this
Is to understand the world
And everthing in it

Comments

[itskylav]

You can't just place a bunch of statements and call it poetry. I see you're trying to be deep but it just comes off as comically edgy. Grammar is off, spelling is wack and none of the lines connect. I understand where you're are coming from, just try to make sense of it.

[biohazard_wolf8080]

Awesome!!!! really makes me think