Life's dark moments

• Artist: Dezan
• Description: It's about life's dark moments and what we must do about them
• Date: 08/16/2009
• Tags: lifes dark moments

Life shares its dark moments with one and with all
Death comes for one then comes for all
Sadness and despair rule one and rule all
And pain comes to surface in the cold-hearted thrawl

Day in and day out for some its the same
The poor the wounded the hurt and the lame
But do not look upon them with disgust and distain
For you could as easily be the one with no name

But nay disbelieve that lifes only here to take what is sweet, lovly, and dear
Fight through see through that darkness and fear
Even when it says you are nothing one would hold dear
For wickedness must lie to hold itself high lest it suucum to less than its pride

Life shares its dark moments with one and with all
But thats not all that life has in stall
We gather those dark moments and start anew
In which we all bid those dark moments adieu

Comments

[Dancing Armadillo Mage]

You have a good grasp of form which is rare but you need to branch out and touch more subjects. Write a poem without the word Death in it for example. Really though, I commend you. I can't write rhyming poetry at all.

[cutekitty018-]

ths is great work dezan

[Archeyah]

Very cool.