lost and found

• Artist: i_love_vampys
• Description: yup just was bored
• Date: 08/13/2009
• Tags: lost found

i was lost but now i am found u r the one that makes my world go round,

i was lost but not yet found and you are still not around

i am lost not yet found please will you stick around??

i was lost but now i am found by you a sweet loving guy that makes my heart pound.

Comments

[Paper Crane Kiko]

okay well i like the poem in general but the last line could flow a little better i think.... (take off a syllable or too... )