what a wonderful summer day

• Artist: Purple_Converse44
• Description: a poem about dream summer day
• Date: 08/12/2009
• Tags: wonderful summer

the sun gleams across the sky
the white clouds are passing by
i feel a breeze blow my hair
when i sit apon a chair

i splash into the pool
and my skin starts to cool
then i thing to my self
what a wonderful summer day

i go boating on the lake
i get so hot i feel like im gonna bake
i look down and see a stone
then i skip it through the water zone

i hear birds sing
the sun gleams like a ring
then i think to myself
what a wonderful summer day

Comments

[Kelita44]

First of all, if you are going to write, you really should learn how to capitalize and punctuate your sentences. Also, check for typos. Your poem looks a little stupid saying, "and I thing to my self," when I'm sure you meant "think." Also, "myself" is just one word in that context.