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I look in the mirror
To see my magnified mistakes
I ask your opinion
To learn what it takes
I load my head
With guilt from the past
You soothe my chaos
But that won't always last
You give me your time
Which I know is precious
I fight myself
And you lower my tensions
When I wish myself gone
You completely disagree
I don't know who you are
But you're who I want to be
- Title: Who I Want To Be
- Artist: iChi iTsu
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Description:
One of my favorite poems. :*
Would love to hear your opinion. :D - Date: 08/08/2009
- Tags: self hate comfort time
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Fasia3 - 09/14/2009
- Cannot stress... how brilliant that was... I think you hit my "spot"....
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- iChi iTsu - 08/13/2009
- This is my usual style for writing poems if and when I ever write. x3
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- Mutandanstan - 08/12/2009
- It intrigued me in how you put your words and stanzas together.
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- iChi iTsu - 08/10/2009
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Glad you did. (:
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- King of Trash - 08/09/2009
- hmmm... interesting... I liked it, 5/5...
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- iChi iTsu - 08/08/2009
- Thank you guys. biggrin
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- UC Poika - 08/08/2009
- Intriguing concept and so true.
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