Go through days

• Artist: Soul Paradox
• Description: Some days aren't worth the details.
• Date: 08/01/2009
• Tags: through days

I woke with swollen eyes
and got ready for school.
I walked to the bus with lead feet
prepared to act cool.
I plugged in my music
to drown out the noise.
I got off and walked
to my first class with false poise.
I plodded through classes
one more day down.
I got on the bus
heading home with my frown.
I unlocked the door
and slunk to my room.
I crawled into bed
with a feeling of gloom.
I shivered and huddled
and then started to cry.
Not a day have I lived
I've not wanted to die.

Comments

[red_ribbon22]

wow prep aren't you just filled with CONSTRUCTIVE criticism? :p
Anyway . . >.> Nicely done. 5/5

[Soul Paradox]

Well thank you Miss Prep. Your input is very much appreciated. -coughs back laughter-

[Sunnie_prep]

i hate it. very emo.

[Peek Aw Chu]

That was. . . Powerful.

[DlEBOUTONNER]

you got talent 100000/5

[OCD Panda Mo Nyum]

Lovely! You really are quite talented. Nice work!