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my name is christina
im 7 years old today
i went out to play
to find my daddy
he cursed at me
for being ugly and nasty
he told me i was dumb
after that i felt glum
i was getting ready for bed
i came in the next room
to find my mommy dead
i asked wat happened
but he just smacked me in the head
i woke up hurting
i went to my daddy
then he cruley
KILLED ME
today im 8 yrs old
im in a better place
but i still remember the living room
and the darkest corner of the room
- by luvbug1991 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/31/2009 |
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- Title: darkest corner of the room
- Artist: luvbug1991
- Description: stay against chil abuse i was on the computer of a lil girl called christina
- Date: 07/31/2009
- Tags: darkest corner room
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Comments (3 Comments)
- bloodychunks - 08/03/2009
- i agree.. fix you last two lines and it'd be great. ^^
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- ElectraShocked - 08/02/2009
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The part "and all he did to me was he killed me" sounds horribly wrong. The last two sentances ruin it, they're repetative. Please fix these errors! It could be REALLY good!!!
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- XxXCryxXx - 07/31/2009
- omg....this is sooo cool
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