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Inside I burn,
My heart throbs,
and I thrash around in pain.
All this time I wonder,
Why am I still alive?
And then I remember...
Only because you're here,
Holding together mangled pieces.
- by The One in Shadows |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/29/2009 |
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- Title: Broken
- Artist: The One in Shadows
- Description: Ummm...same thing as my other poem ^_^
- Date: 07/29/2009
- Tags: broken hurt pain romantic
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Comments (6 Comments)
- PrimaMoMo - 07/29/2009
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it's really good.
free verse?
i like it. you could add more, but it's perfect.
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- XxXCryxXx - 07/29/2009
- beautiful
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- XxXAllen_WalkerXxX21 - 07/29/2009
- I think u can add a little more to this poem but i still think its a good poem
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- GothAngel34 - 07/29/2009
- oh man babie thats a beautiful poem
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