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Black is the color that makes you stand still in fright.
Black is the color that makes you strith for light.
Black is the color that sounds like death at the door.
Black is the color that sounds like mist moving across the floor.
Black is the color that smells like a sword drenched in blood.
Black is the color that smells like a dieing rose bud.
Black is the color that taste like your biggest fear.
Black is the color that taste like the crimson tear.
Black is the color that feels like a soft black cat.
Black is the color that feels like a velvety top hat.
Black is the color that makes me feel like sleeping for eternity.
Black is the color that makes me feel like I'm in a sea of serenity.
Black is the color of a vampires tomb.
Black is the color of a house in the grasp of doom.
- by Kamui DeLancre |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/23/2009 |
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- Title: the color black
- Artist: Kamui DeLancre
- Description: i wrote this poem when i was in the second grade it sucks but its the best i got
- Date: 07/23/2009
- Tags: color black
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Kamui DeLancre - 02/26/2010
- really? i was just following the requirements and it ended up like this
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- nanakg27 - 02/26/2010
- this is rlly deep for a second greater
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- Kamui DeLancre - 09/01/2009
- uh... thanks..light
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- light shinomi - 08/27/2009
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its a little rymy but not terrible for a second grade Gothic poem.
seriously no one says anything is gothic anymore, its all 'emo' scene - Report As Spam
- Kamui DeLancre - 07/26/2009
- it really sucks
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