You are the one.

• Artist: Audible ChocoIate
• Description: yeah, i wrote this and won a poetry contest. =D
• Date: 07/21/2009
• Tags: love heart broken

I am the one who is watching you cry.
I am the one who is watching you die.
I am the one who is watching you fly.
Straight up to heaven.

I am the one who loved you.
I am the one who cared for you.
I am the one who shared their heart with you but,
now you are flying, straight up to heaven.

I am the one whose heart you have broken.
I am the one whose mind you have destroyed.
I am the one whose ache will never have joy but,
now you are flying straight up to heaven.

Now

You are the one who is watching me cry.
You are the one who is watching me die.
You are the one who is watching me fly.
Straight up to heaven.

To be with the one I love.

You.

Comments

[Sugar Quill Drops]

Wow.
That was... amazing.
And you've even spelled everything right... except..
third paragraph, all those "who's" should be "whose" .

But I hope she's okay
I can't imagine what it must have been like for you to find that out.... :/