Painting

• Artist: Coloratura
• Description: It's a rough draft. These jumbled lines came to me last night, so i figured i'd put them here as to not forget about them.
• Date: 07/21/2009
• Tags: painting

My painting
Maybe my painting is being worked with a pallet knife
Piling paint on,
Weighing me down,
Then being scraped away,
Or maybe it’s painted with a soft, round brush,
Colors mixing into an infinity of gradients
Or a chaotic splatter.
But sometimes my painting tears in half,
And sometimes it looks better that way.

Comments

[l-Phagnomenal-l]

its cool, cant wait to see it finished

[Hadenshall]

For something rough, this is very good. Your onto something. Please let me know if you post this as a finished piece. I would really like to read it. I am not rating because I feel its unfair to critique that which you say is not finished.

Your fellow writer,
~Haden

[lautnerrules43]

interesting, not many people would do that... and thats a compliment!