The day i left

• Artist: luchia30
• Description: a girl who leaves with her family moving away from the boy she cared for but never saw again.
• Date: 07/20/2009
• Tags: thedayileft movingaway neversawagain

heart i said "good bye i'll miss you..."
heart you said " why are you leaving"
I replied " i had no choice i wanted to stay but i cant so good bye Ryan."
he yelled " don't go stay here please...?"
after that simple day of good-byes and tears
we drove and flew to our new home in a new city in a new state
but minus the good friends we all had.
so every time i listen or dream there you are right in front of me
you always say I'm glad you never left then i love you.
it was never the same since the day i left...
so now i finally say i love you always have and always will
i haven't said that yet but it was a sad day...
The Day I Left heart heart

Comments

[mirachan3]

has alot of meaning but has no poetic or lyrical structure. Has origniality and creativity, since i haven't seen alo to of these. If you added some more structure it would be a lot better. But I give it a three for being orignial and creative.