I Wished Upon A Lady Bug.

• Artist: l Bell l
• Description: Well I thought to myself,
  being random again,
  that most people don't wish on lady bugs.
  And why not?
  I guess you'll see.
• Date: 07/16/2009
• Tags: wished upon lady

A lazy afternoon,
petals turned over,
weeping in the breeze,
my feet stepping lightly,
with wild grass almost up to my knees.

I sneeze,
"Allergies", I mutter under my breath,
While being preoccupied with my sneeze,
I tripped over a rock,
and fell down,
right down on the ground.

A lady bug so tender and fair,
landed on my nose,
she laughed at me,
she pitied the poor creature she did see.

"I'll give you one wish." She whispered softly and sweetly,
I opened my eyes wide,
staring awkwardly at this strange little bug,
unsure of what to say,
I just flicked the little creature off my nose,
and walked away.

Comments

[OrangeCaramelApplePie712]

I like it basically from what I got you are trying to imply that person takes no notice of what the lady bug says and just flicks it away in annoyance of a bug not realizing a wish was about???? I think thats what you meant to imply i give it a five because who is to judge what is poetry besides expression of soul

[PoisonousMoonlight]

I wouldn't care if it was a lady bug or not gimme that wish! I would at least tag along with the bug and make a wish if it came true or not