Poor Old Man...

• Artist: x-I2-0-S-E-x
• Description: this poem i wrote about a year ago for an english assignment, it's about how people in need are unnoticed every day.
• Date: 07/14/2009
• Tags: poor lonely rose

The poor old man sits lonely and cold,
no one to love, no one to hold.
He always sees people, not a thought goes his way,
As he sits thinking in his dark alleyway.

Wicked and cruel the harsh wind blows,
Nobody cares, nobody knows.
He thinks of a family, and lets out a sigh.
The first drops of rain can be heard nearby.

He closes his eyes and counts to four...
All is over.
He is alone no more.

Comments

[Mutandanstan]

Did you mean it to be a rhyming poem? the first stanza rhymes well enough but the second one only rhymes with the first two lines and then it doesn't, and in the last stanza then you rhyme four with more so...rhyme or no rhyme?

[Enternal Duet]

i really like this poem you are very talented ^^