Simile Poems

• Artist: cupcakeluvr
• Description: I hope you enjoy these! Freshly made right on the spot! LOL, rate honestly and comments will only improve my next batch!
• Date: 07/10/2009
• Tags: simile poems

Walking through clouds
is like tasting the Whipped Cream
on a Freshly made Lemon Meringue Pie


Bringing home your new little puppy
from the pet store is as wonderful
as ripping open presents on Christmas


Riding down a zip line through a rain forest
is as thrilling as looping over and over again
on the craziest roller coaster in the country

Comments

[the real lunarninja00]

the similes can't be any better, honestly, but now i would recommend that you use them in a poem to help convey a feeling, whatever that poem may be.