Stones of the Elements

• Artist: Darkest_Lies_4_1
• Description: I'm planning to use this in a four book series that I'm currently brainstorming.
  
  In the last line of the fifth paragrah if you have a better and different word for 'chest' that would be great. The same goes for the first line in the paragraph for the word 'lengthened'. (I'm not sure what to put for that)
  
  Any critisism would be much appriated!
• Date: 07/06/2009
• Tags: stones elements

Four small stones
Placed in the four corners
Of this lone world
Keeps four different powers
In perfect balance and harmony

Up to the far North
Above the lands land's heart
A small rough stone
Lies the Earth's Emerald

In the distant East
Under the hottest land
A small bright stone
Liest the Heart's Ruby

Down to the long South
Hidden in the cold blue
A small smooth stone
Lies the Eye's Saffire

Through the lenghtened West
High above the rest
A small clear stone
Lies the Chest's Diamond

At the worlds heart
Each stone has a place
For those of pure heart
Shall hear their voices