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One minute I'm fine, not a scratch on me;
the next, I'm seeing colors as bright as the eye can see.
I see red, rouge, and scarlet dance across my face
as white and glassy greays race at a tremendous pace.
I witness a war between black and emerald green
but a stealthy panther black decided to intervene; it wasn't a good scene!
I watch as deep violet whispered to azure blue,
'I've seen many gorgeous colors, but not as stunning as you.'
I saw a bit of rosy pink on her cheek.
The mistake that I made was that.....I blinked.
I watched in awe as the colors became undone;
I said, without thinking: "Well, so much for my colorful fun!"
- by Holy angel1441 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/05/2009 |
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- Title: Colors
- Artist: Holy angel1441
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- Date: 07/05/2009
- Tags: flashback
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- Agorphia - 07/08/2009
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Great description and imagery! Cute ending. :3
The only part that bothers me is stanza 3. The tiger part is kind of random,so describe the black and "panther black" so there's a vicious animal theme going for that stanza. Then it'll make more sense. :3 - Report As Spam