Flames

• Artist: Shadowashes
• Description: This's kind of a rip-off. It's supposed to be describing the feeling of turning into a vampire. So I sort of got it from Twilight (Breaking Dawn).
• Date: 07/01/2009
• Tags: flames twilight transformatiob

All this must be over
I feel the end coming nearer
The darkness is getting thicker
My thoughts bleaker
I strangly welcome this
Not wanting to live anymore
I won't be able to go on now
Nothing's more welcoming then this floor
Suddenly the worst pain begins
Right in my heart
I scream out in shock and pain
I want to fall apart
The firy pain spreads slowly
This was just excrutiating
My screams come out more often
Why was this happening
Finally it's filled my body
It's practically frying my brain
I scream out loudly for someone to kill me
I needed to escape this pain
Hours go by so slowly
Not one thing is wroth this
I can't believe any of the pain
I wanted the reapers kiss
Then slowly the pain fadded
From the smaller parts of me
I felt stronger
A reason for it un-seen
Hours later it was over
My hearts beats done
My body had fought hard against the fire
Yet neither had won

Comments

[RisexWithxthexDead]

I love it and NO it does not copy off of Breaking Dawn. Let me tell you now whenever a new vampire book comes out people are going to be like "Oh my GOD! They are copying twilight!" NOOO stephanie meyer did not get some unmerited own on vampires. Does anyone remeber Anne Rice?! More or less, good poem biggrin

[Under Cover of Knight]

Woah, this is deep. I love it