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You're still in my heart;
Can't get you out of my head,
But the second you broke me,
I wished us both dead.
I'll try my hardest
Not to think about you
But it's not that easy;
I can't forget about you.
We were once great friends,
But that came to an end
The second you started
That rumor.
You started to lie and then deny
When we came face-to-face.
But I knew you too well,
I knew your tell,
And I knew right away what you had done.
I didn't want to believe it
When I first got word,
But seeing your face
I then understood.
It started with lies that were easily brushed off,
But when you saw them not hurt me
You made matters worse:
You quickly forgot deception and lies
And instead spilled things you knew not you should.
Things became worse for me and now
As I sit at my desk and pull back the trigger
I glance at a single sheet of tear-stained paper,
Written on it my final thoughts ever:
Why did you do it?
How could you do?
What made you do it?
Good-bye now my friend;
I guess I should be happy;
At least half my wish has come true.
- Title: Half a Wish Come True.
- Artist: Hisa-Ai
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Description:
A really dark poem of mine that I just wrote and felt that needed to be shared.
Personally, I really like the title; I think it's dark enough to suit this poem, but not too dark, 'ya know? But let me know what 'ya think. - Date: 06/27/2009
- Tags: half wish come true
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Comments (2 Comments)
- haiku_daydreamer - 06/29/2009
- I love it! Wish I could rate 1000!
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- L30NlTU5 - 06/27/2009
- That's really sad... Excellent poem...
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