Not Afraid To Fall

• Artist: Ace Edmonds PD
• Description: Love Poem, hope you like
• Date: 06/25/2009
• Tags: afraid fall

I never wish to feel how I did before
I only want to feel this, and nothing more
A feeling so unique and bold
So different from the usual cold
A flame lit, burning inside
So brightly ablaze, no hope to hide
This feeling, you see, so far from a curse
To lose it, I fear, there could be no worse
A feeling, for once, that is no facade
A sensation, so new, and yet, odd
Odd to never have felt before
But now, to feel, and crave more
A desire so long bound and suppressed
But now, today, the problem redressed
For so long, you see, I felt nothing at all
But now, I swear, I’m ready to fall

Comments

[Marty_x3]

WOW *___*
this poem is just great! i love it..
really well done!

[XxGory GordyxX]

Wow i really like this i like how not ALL of it rhymed and stoped in the middle its amazingly awesome lolz

[the Renaissance Lives]

I'm not usually a fan of the overtly rhyming poems, but for some reason yours flowed well. I like the diverse amount of vocabulary you used, and though this only depicts one side of love, as a love poem goes you were able to capture the enticing idea well.