Leaving

• Artist: Silvar_sigrund
• Description: This is how i have been feeling lately with almost no one around me anymore. my life has been going down hill ever since i broke up with My last gf and it doest look like it will get any better any time soon which is what has inspired this poem
• Date: 06/16/2009
• Tags: leaving

Is there no one for me here
Is everyone leaveing me
Or being forced out of my life
Either way i feel alone
In this realm of darkness
Whatever have i done
To warrent this lonliness
I dont want to be alone
Its getting to dark in here
Is that how i will turn out
All alone in this world
Where one thing every person
Seems to need is someone else
Someone I may never have
What am i going to do next
I want to fight for them
I want to find someone
But I keep getting hurt
Maybe i should just stop
Stop trying and let them go
And find other people in life
That really will care about me

Comments

[Polly Odd]

I can't help you much, but I will say that this poem is good. It's free-verse, not my favorite, but here's my two cents:
You need to move on. Lingering on the past never gets us anywhere. Trust me; I've been there. Let us, everyone who is deserting you, go. I'm not going to leave a friend even though we're under the circumstances that we are. The choice is up to you. You have to choose weather you want to live in the past or try to make a better futur