Guardian Angel

• Artist: Hellgoat
• Description: Written by me about a year ago...If not longer
• Date: 06/15/2009
• Tags: guardian angel

You don't want me to be here,
I'm your guardian angel,
I wasn't invited,
Even tho, it's in my arms where your blood runs,
Temptation hides,
Scarlet colored tears,
Your blood through my arms runs,
It's me!
Your guardian angel,
The bitter company,
I abandon you, every night and day.

Comments

[Mentalpatient128]

i think its really deep, but i would agree wit monstertamer1, i think poems an such need a bit of a order, sequences to them, but still, this is good

[Epic Kittehsaurus]

Tiny bit disorganized...and needs some work.
But it's got a great idea behind it.
smile 4/5