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When the night falls and life goes to sleep
It's then i hear my heart beat,
That's when i'm with me.
Have you ever stood in front of the mirror,
And looked into your eyes?
Have you ever tried to answer those questions,
The answers you are searching outside?
Have you ever felt like crying,
But no tears came down?
Have you ever felt the smoke,
Choking you from inside?
Have you ever had the strange feeling that words can't explain,
You can feel them, but didn't know what to say?
Have you ever felt alone even in a crowd,
Felt a shadow moving by your side, even when no one is around?
Have you ever waited for someone,
Someone who has gone....
Though deep inside you've always known they'll never come back??? heart heart
- by spicy angie |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/15/2009 |
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- Title: Have You Ever?
- Artist: spicy angie
- Description: well, this one is my first writing.........i'm not sure if it's good enough bt hope u enjoy....feel free to comment honestly.....
- Date: 06/15/2009
- Tags: have ever
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Comments (3 Comments)
- angel_ninja - 12/22/2009
- 4/5 very good
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- Indigo Kitsune - 06/15/2009
- Not bad, but you might want to polish it a little.
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- Trab barT - 06/15/2009
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Not bad. But I think it could use some paragraphing, as i see it, the first three lines can be separated from the rest.
Oh and those lovely bouncy hearts at the end... hmm...they certainly express a lot. wink - Report As Spam