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Take me down in flames,
Wipe them with your oily rag,
Take me down in flames,
Make my burning be on cross so tame,
Make me fall,
Tremble me down to those deep caves,
Make it crash,
Tumbled down hard until those morals dance around my head,
Then they can fade,
They can run, dissipate, blending into...
Running creeks playing dead,
As I find myself newly shaped, poisoned in lead,
While my spine thrusts itself erect,
Upward the voices demand, legs straight in stance,
Keeping my head dizzy,
The gas fumes rising against the nostril...
Foolish breathing helps me collapse,
On rose topography that burns my back,
And clench,
For the life of me, my fingers tangle in spider formation,
Take me to the flame,
So my perch is true and oven so bold,
Take me to the flame,
As to emerge not ash, but stepped into phoenix uniform.
- by WereSquishy |
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- | Submitted on 06/13/2009 |
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- Title: Mouse
- Artist: WereSquishy
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- Date: 06/13/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Panic Pirate - 06/18/2009
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Very, VERY powerful. You've got a great technique of entwining the stark bleakness of each stanza with a defiant melancholy. I'm proud to say I didn't have to look down at the comments to know it was inspired by pictures of the Holocaust (Mouse- a subtle clue. Brilliantly subtle)
You're talented smile
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- WereSquishy - 06/18/2009
- What is he trying to become a movie actor and believe in crazy bat s**t scientology like the rest of them? Cause he's doing the best he can right now in the crazy bat s**t department, XD
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- Laimickel - 06/18/2009
- ^^good^^ (there was this kid at my school who was like 'the holocaust never happened' but on the flip side he called everyone a communist)
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- WereSquishy - 06/17/2009
- Wanted to do the photos justice...
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- Laimickel - 06/16/2009
- ^^it sounds like the holocaust
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- WereSquishy - 06/15/2009
- Inspired by pictures of the Holocaust.
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- Laimickel - 06/15/2009
- I like your vocabulary and how the first couple of stanzas start with 'take'.
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