JJ

• Artist: WorIds
• Description: another poem i wrote about a friensd who was going through a lot this year and it was hard to deal with eveything...i had a lot more on my plate than the usual s**t load i was used to......so i wrote about a lot of it
• Date: 06/11/2009
• Tags: death knife

This bottle you hold,
it was your knife.
And at your hands,
it took your dear life.
The tears that you shed
was your river of blood,
and because you can't stop,
it will soon overflood.
If only more people
knew about your depression
than just you and I,
than maybe you wouldn't
have wanted to die.
Poor,poor little boy,
used to love Life's Dance,
was soon unable
to come out of
Death's Trance.

Comments

[WorIds]

Thank you for the comments,and to Ichigoe666,I will keep that in mind.Thank you

[Ichigoe666]

very well writen. i love the flow of words and how the meaning behind the words can be felt through out the poem. sorry that you go throu so much, but even in darkness we come up with the most beautifull creations in our life times. If you ever want to talk you can talk to me on here no problem.

[saturnnightshade]

Awww, I like this, it touches me...