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Oh the neon colors
the graceful, such beautiful sight
that makes my heart beat faster
and my throat grow tight.
the perfect colors unfold
and fall under the earth
bringing precious memories
for hours watching but all worth.
in the night colored view
everything so magnificant
than waiting for morning to come with dew
than the sun will rise
and the bright light will come
to find that morning has awaken umongst my eyes.
- Title: the sunrise set
- Artist: N5SloveN
- Description: it may not make any since to some people but it did to me when I wrote it. :) Hopefully you like it. Some of it rhymes some doesn't but yeah. :)
- Date: 06/10/2009
- Tags: sunet rise sunrise
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Comments (4 Comments)
- GentryDuchess - 06/17/2009
- beautiful! smile
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- onionio - 06/13/2009
- I like the imagery. You have captured the picture well. Most poems I read here are depressing or angry so it's nice to read something a bit more joyful. Good work!
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- N5SloveN - 06/10/2009
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Nice mckenzi!
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- bloodrose389 - 06/10/2009
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thats just beutiful
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