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What is this that I feel?
My heart is heavy with it
Perhaps… more than one emotion
- - - -A pleasant tingle,
- - - - - - - - - - a gentle sigh
But then- - -– trembling hands
An aching soul
Empty
- - - - - - - - -So empty
Could you maybe be the solution?
The end to this misery
The cessation of loneliness
You…
With those vivid blue eyes
Colorful mind
- - - - -Brilliant soul
- - - - - - - - -Beautiful
- - - - - - - - - - - - -So beautiful
Will my heart now feel again?
I want to know what it means
I want to learn to let myself be loved
It’s terrifying
- - - - -And, yet…
- - - - - - - - - - -Exhilarating
- - -Eager
So eager
Will you awaken my soul?
I love the warmth of your hands
You are Perfect
And, yet
So flawed
That’s what I love about you
My heart,
- - - - - - - - -My only
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -My love.
- by Lady Caitri |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/06/2009 |
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- Title: An Aching Soul
- Artist: Lady Caitri
- Description: a simple love poem. criticism welcome.
- Date: 06/06/2009
- Tags: love longing wistfulness
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Yewix - 06/09/2009
- Wow that was really well done.
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- xXx Moody xXx - 06/08/2009
- Very deep...5/5...u could be professional, in my opinion.
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- hansonluver77 - 06/07/2009
- that was beautiful!
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