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Remember that girl you shot in the head?
Well she really isn't dead.
She lives on,
But her life is gone.
She'll live in your guilt.
On that wall of shame you built.
It's as she wanted,
You're truly haunted.
She'll rot in the ground,
You think without sound.
The life you took,
Made you the hook.
She in the head,
Living on guilt,
In the ground
Forever.
Maybe she's dead,
On that wall you built
Making no sound
Forever.
- by CrucioMeDarling |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/04/2009 |
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- Title: She'll Live On.
- Artist: CrucioMeDarling
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Description:
I wrote this one day.
I was super tired and this came out AMAZING.
Tell me your thoughts! - Date: 06/04/2009
- Tags: shell live dead shot
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Greeneroo - 06/04/2009
- The subject is good, but your rhyming pattern is off in th last few lines. 3/5
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