A Promised Poem

• Artist: Das Matt
• Description: I wrote this as a feeble attempt to get a girl I've known for a while to go out with me.
  Thank god it never reached her, 'cause I worded this WAY too strongly.
• Date: 06/02/2009
• Tags: promised poem

a poem i promised you
so write one i shall
a poem with heart
for a pretty young gal

a bit too cliche?
maybe, but still
i've kept it locked up
now tell you, i will

it shouldn't be held
especially from you
my feelings of amore
are most definitely true

maybe these words
are somewhat exaggerated
but the initial feeling
is not in the slightest, fabricated

ever since the day,
that i had first met you
i knew into my heart
i would eventually let you

a bit strange, i know
but that's how i work
at least i'm not just
another cold-hearted jerk

i've lost sleep over this
i cant discern wrong from right
that being said,
are you free saturday night?

Comments

[VampireIce1]

w...o...w i showed this to all of my friends and one of my friends, Ian Nash thought that i was only showing this so he would go out with me, so i told him why i was showing this and then he said oh...... sorry. but this poem is coool

[Kyril Raian]

dude..O.o that's a pretty awesome poem..O.o simple, direct, and a smooth way to ask someone out..xDDD i think u worded it strongly, but not too strongly.. biggrin it's fine biggrin

[NebuChi3]

Whoever that girl is, well, she's lucky.
Extremely lucky.

You should show this to her.
Who knows, maybe she'll understand it like you do.