Emo

• Artist: NotTheSoldier
• Description: After writing this I decided to write a follow up story, so if you like this you might like my story A House Is NOT A Home. Note that I am not the best rhymer and the only way to get this particular idea out was to write it in poem form. Sorry for any strangness with the flow of it. Please enjoy!
• Date: 06/01/2009
• Tags: blood cuts depression

People watch
People stare
Yet I find
I don't really care

I can see them
Through my hair
And I know
That they stare

Is it right
To witness my pain
Not bothering
To stop me?

I break the skin
With a blade and
Watch as
Deep red liquid seeps from the skin

I should stop, I really should
But I don't for
This horrid action
Is the only way I can know that I am still truely alive...

Comments

[Lil Karamel09]

i like it and i learned that everything does not have to flow together. what your saying is plain to see and it is good! i want to see this story!!

[SolsticeXII]

It's sort of awkward to read because the first two stanzas flow well but the rest don't.