Running

• Artist: Catarina Una
• Description: This is my first time trying poetry. Advice would be so helpful. >.> I know it's probably going to be horrible, but it's what I've got. I know this a different form of poetry, but I forgot what it was called. >.< Once again, It was ment to be short.
• Date: 05/25/2009
• Tags: running

Running.
Adrenaline, Breathing.
Heat and Wind.
Pounding, panting.
Air and Sweat.
Slowing down, then speeding up.
Cross the line and then you're done.

Comments

[I Like to Eat Faces]

Thats pretty good, especially for a first piece. Its almost a cross between a Idyll poem and a Cinquain. You should look up poem types and structures. There may be a poetry career ahead of you is you so choose. ^_^

[Catarina Una]

no, not yet. ^^

[xx_ILY_mari_xx]

me?/ i love it <33 keep it up!!!// have u done any more poetry???