Mortis and Amore

• Artist: Mortis Amore
• Description: (Language check/understanding)
  
  (Mortis: Death in lattin)
  (Amore: Love in lattin)
  (And: same as english)
  
  I wrote this about a friend who betrayed me.
  Please comment, I hope you enjoy.
• Date: 05/24/2009
• Tags: mortis amore

I stare at my reflection
I see myself weep
Chains linking my spirit
And thou spirit's soul to keep
Can you really save me
Can you find a cure
Have thou thought of leaving me
Leaving me insecure
Can you find an essence
Is there end in sight
Imagine my adolescence
Like a burning riot
Like nothing left to adore
Like nothing left to scorn
Like nothing left to look for
Behind the open door
Like nothing left to share
To kill
To feel
Like nothing left that's real

Comments

[oXPinkAngelXo]

its amazing! very nice...5/5!

[The Pond]

This is nice. (Not the subject, the poem) Your rhyming rhythm is jumping around a bit, but it's cool.

[XKimmie_SeleneX]

My friende betrayed me too. But you know wat?
Nothing hurts worst than the betrayal of a sister or someone inside your own family...