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I see you one day.
In the sunlight that way.
I fall in love with your great smile.
I wished I stayed for a while.
Your eyes are bright and blue.
I think you like me, too.
But I have no clue.
I see you another day with another girl.
I was upset for the whole day.
I come back tomorrow.
To be sad and sorrow.
You see me under the tree and feel what I feel.
You gave me chocolates and flowers;
asked me on a date.
And told me to relaxed and be okay.
My smile comes back.
And my broken heart is away.
And I have my passion from before and today.
- by iRains Rose |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/22/2009 |
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- Title: My Life Fades Away
- Artist: iRains Rose
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Description:
It's about a girl who falls in love with a guy. Who looses her interest in other things. Her main focus is in the guy, but it fades away when she see's him with another girl. And she forgot that the guy is a stranger. But will her dreams come back?
This is first time, kk? - Date: 05/22/2009
- Tags: fades away
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Penultimate Penance - 03/03/2014
- 'To be sad and sorrow'...? That doesn't sound like it makes sense. Personally, I think love is mentioned too often and is predictable. I would've created poetry with a different topic.
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- iRains Rose - 05/31/2009
- Thank You for voting :3 I got 4.50 right now :3
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- iRains Rose - 05/24/2009
- Thanks :3
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- Azn_RockIngChick - 05/23/2009
- awww i love this one
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- iRains Rose - 05/23/2009
- Thank you =D
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- iiHeartbroken Kitty - 05/23/2009
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It's great sis!!
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