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A hindrance on my situation;
Now I'm pacing in place.
A deliberate connotation;
I'm stating what I think.
A thoughts penetration;
it keeps invading my brain.
I got shot and I'm wasted;
so now I'm facing my fate.
- by Blaze at 420 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/18/2009 |
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- Title: Stopped
- Artist: Blaze at 420
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Description:
A short poem mainly about how my mind is corrupted or halted by outside entities. And in the end, what goes on in your head affects what happens to you in reality.
(BTW: haters will hate no matter what) - Date: 05/18/2009
- Tags: stopped poem
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Comments (4 Comments)
- browniegirl982 - 05/20/2009
- i like it
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- Tiej - 05/19/2009
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look up john montagues poetry...
it might help you understand the concept of writing poetry - Report As Spam
- Devil Ezam - 05/18/2009
- that is so true...
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