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sun shining bright
moon glowing white
stars that twinkle in night
bu all will soon go dim
- by EVILJOKER8888 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/13/2009 |
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- Title: space
- Artist: EVILJOKER8888
- Description: its just my look on the worid
- Date: 05/13/2009
- Tags: space
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- b00_2 - 05/16/2009
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Last line ruins it.
and plus, stars can't twinkle "in" night.
They can twinkle "at" night. - Report As Spam
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