The Loss

• Artist: OpheliannFallen
• Description: I think I should start by saying I pour myself into my work. All of these emotions and scenes are things that took place in my real life. I have been married a year and a half and it is comming to an end very shortly...it has been a very painful experience, but I think life teaches us that in the midst of personal termoil...sometimes we just have to push on.
• Date: 05/06/2009
• Tags: loss

Your love consumed me,but their lust destroyed me.
My eyes are to clouded to tell,which is the finer version of hell.
I gave you everything I could, knowing that your love never would...save me.

Feeling like a failure,
Curled up on the bathroom floor…
What time is it?
How long have I been here?
My body is frozen against the tile of the tub.

I had been crying for you.
Mourning the loss,
Of everything I thought true.

It smells like you hear.
Your aftershave is in the air,
And I can picture you standing their.
You are fixing your hair,
Checking yourself in the mirror.

I remember the way your body felt,
When we were both wet,
Pressed against the shower wall…
Not long ago before we lost it all.

How hollow a room seems,
When you know the truth about the one you love.
The sun must have set,
Because the air is colder.

My mind to clouded to tell,
As I drag myself to my knees,
For a moment I feel like praying…
What is the use in a moment like this?
I bet god is ashamed of me,
For being to blind to see,
All of the deceitful ways you betrayed me.

I’ll wash my face in the sink,
I know the taste of tears.
I have to stop this now.
This mourning of you…
Is going to make me late for work.

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