Eternal Tear

• Artist: Sana Kurata Hayama
• Description: i was kinda down in the dumps when i wrote this.
• Date: 05/05/2009
• Tags: eternal tear

There’s nothing left
Everything’s over
You’re body is empty
All that comes out are tears

Tears are like blood
The way they feel rolling down your face
Dropping onto the floor
Clear, invisible, eternal

When life seems to be pointless
And nobody is there
When all that is left is darkness
When the light dims and fades into black, eternal like a tear drop

Tears
Falling down in torrents
Flooding a city
Flooding a lifeless life

Comments

[Sana Kurata Hayama]

really? awww....i'm sorry. but i'm glad to know that i'm not the only one.

[iTeddy74]

i tottaly relate to that,i feel the same way.XD

[Sana Kurata Hayama]

thanks for the tip and rating and all biggrin

[emeraldpuppy9]

great job =]
the only part that i would change is the part abt how tears are lik blood, because the rest of the stanza doesnt rly relate...
but i liked it still =] 5/5 (:
comment/rate bck plz? <3