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"SHUT UP!!!"
she screams to the voices
inside they argue louder
the happieness crys
the depression hits anger
anger throws her to the floor
sanity comforts happieness
and the real girl
she sits there
and crys and screams
without a voice
she calls for help
without tears
shy crys
without a shadow,
a home, a family, a care
she slowly dies
"SHUT UP!!!"
she screams to the phone
it's ringing under the bed
the person calling
he has no idea of the turmoil
going on in one her head
the depression is gone
the girl no longer crys
the happieness crys herself to death
the girl will never smile
the anger turns on the sanity
they kill eachother
leaving nothing but the girl
the hollow girl
without anyone to care
the gun by the bed looks so tempting
she reaches for it
she grabs it
holds it to her head
pulls the triger
then it goes black
the fueneraul is sad
black, rainy, and bleak
the angels cry as she flys to heaven
her body safe
tucked away in the soft comfort of the earth
the birds save their singing for another place
the rain falls everywhere but her grave
the earth and nature mourn her death
but no human shows up
except one kid in highschool
who never knew her
she still crys
for God
or Satan possibly
put the voices
the horrible voices
into this girl's head
- by Starla Astrum Night |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/01/2009 |
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- Title: The voices
- Artist: Starla Astrum Night
- Description: ... ...
- Date: 05/01/2009
- Tags: voices poem suicide
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Starla Astrum Night - 05/21/2009
- Thank you. If anyone has some hints on how to make my poems better please share. It would be very much appreciated. =)
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- Picturesque Honey - 05/17/2009
- I find your poems so easy to realte to and i love the way you write.
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- Starla Astrum Night - 05/06/2009
- I revised it in the forums if anyone wants to check it out...
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- free_fun_4ever_1116 - 05/05/2009
- i love it... even though the grammar is not 100% accurate, the content is just... perfect... the reader can feel the powerful emotion portrayed in this selection... well done!!!
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- ObsessiveSiriusFanGirl - 05/03/2009
- That is very sad. I love how you captured so much emotion in the girls actions.
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- Moonlight_Maiden123 - 05/01/2009
- wow that was depressing, very depressing actually...interesting theme, and a even more depressing ending. nice job
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