Our Reality

• Artist: Moonlight_Maiden123
• Description: if u r going to rate low or high plz leave a comment so i can see what im doing right or wrong.
• Date: 05/01/2009
• Tags: reality

Gentle breeze
Soft skies
A colorful field
And a prattling brook
Is what I dream…

Harsh winds
Dark skies
A dead zone
And a roaring river
Is my reality

Days of joy
Nights of peace
Mornings of sun
And nights of stars
Is how it should be…

Days of wickedness
Nights of terror
Mornings of grey
And nights of black
Is what it is now

A smile to give
A laugh to share
A hug to support
A kiss for compassion
Is what everyone should do…

A frown to depress
A snicker to mock
A punch to fight
A gun to kill
Is what some have turned to

Hands to hold
Babies to love
Watch children grow
And a family to be there
Should be apart of life

Papers to separate
Clinics for abortions
Nothing for show
And no one to run too
Should never have to be a decision

Gentle breeze
Soft skies
A colorful field
And a prattling brook
Is what I dream…

Harsh winds
Dark skies
A dead zone
And a roaring river
Is everyone’s reality

Comments

[scitama]

Another great one by you! It's great how you compared utopia to dystopia, good to bad. Reality really should be better than what it sometimes is smile

[Sunlight_Maiden456]

omg......jess that was.......a............A.............HOTTTTTT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wowza!!! nice it make totall sence i like paragraph #6 with the gun and killing awesome!!!! nice!!!

[emeraldpuppy9]

wonderfully done =]
i <3 it... some of it sounds so like me XD LOL!
but in stanza 7, last line, isnt "apart" supposed to be "a part"? typo prolly, just thought id say XDD
i srsly love it, favorited, and 5'd XDD
rate/comment bck?

[Blazing Passion]

Awesome job. Well writen!!

[Phinagin2000]

aww it's sadly true in many ways.. gj on the poem! 5/5