Icicle garden

• Artist: Zelkova20
• Description: Cold and heartwarming
• Date: 04/18/2009
• Tags: icicle garden

Dripping morning dew on this grass of crystal blue, cold and gleaming diamonds of nature,
beautiful to see but cold to the touch. You decide if it is to be loved or feared, wonderful or monstrous,majestic yet so simple, maybe thats all we need, something simple.

Comments

[ewor]

o.O i lk it does have rythm flammarumlea since he has put it , in it so u no what the next line is

[Poisoned by Pandas]

if it was in poem form like after the commas you skip a line.

[flammarumlea]

I like it, though i would have liked it a little better if it was broken up into lines so that it gives it some rythm