Gone.

• Artist: Alice_Jasper_Kawaii
• Description: This is a Haiku I wrote for school.
  Enjoy.
• Date: 04/17/2009
• Tags: gone

Her hair swiftly blows as the wind does.
One last whisper she speaks.
Then she left you alone.

Comments

[the big buttJR]

yea a haiku is 7,5,7

[hikari megumi 15]

good one, but a haiku is not formatted like that.

line has to have a specific iambic pentameter: 5,7,5

example of my haiku:
The rays of the sun;
its yellow streak of light burns
on my light brown skin.