Love hurts

• Artist: -I- Broken Butterfly -I-
• Description: ..........
• Date: 04/14/2009
• Tags: love destroys

He said he loved me
He said he wanted me
But he didnt he lied
The pain going through my heart
Death eating me up inside

What to do with myself idk
All i can do is cry
The sun doesnt shine anymore
Only darkness around me
Dark alone and hurt
Im blind In this dark room

All i can hear is the voices in my head
Maybe one day i will be free From this pain and darkness
Maybe i will be able to shine in the sun
But for now i stand alone THE END

Comments

[Cymbolic_Lyght]

i really like it but maybe you can mention what "he" did wrong like you could say He looked at me, right in the eye, I asked him why, and all i did was cry

[Kechero-TheForsakenRose]

It's a subject that I have read on here countless times... If you want yours to be reconized, you need to compose it better. I do hope you find happiness though.

[Rinitzy]

...good poem...

[RzTTop]

...kinda plain, and to many abbreviations.