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Rage has filled my heart. Along with Pain and Doubt. Pain that you have done and doubt of whats to come. So here I stand. With a knife in my hand. Revenge is on my mind. With Death on my side. You better lock all your doors and crawl on the floor. Cause here I come. Knocking on your doors. Filling you with fright.
- by G-HELPER01 |
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- | Submitted on 04/03/2009 |
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- Title: Rage, Pain, and Doubt
- Artist: G-HELPER01
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This is my first poem I've ever writin. So if the rhyme schmes off would u just cut me a break I'd appreciate it.
And if u would be kind enough. If you think something needs change just type the original part and then what u think it should be changed to.
Leave a Comment please - Date: 04/03/2009
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Comments (4 Comments)
- pony say rawr - 05/10/2009
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ohhh i luffels it
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- iAnime_Lover1 - 05/08/2009
- o kool nice
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- Baby Treasure - 04/11/2009
- well my first thought was this is evil but i love it kinda sounds like my bff she is all dark and in to that kinda stuff but it's cool. your good so keep going. and no part needs to be changed on your poem i would eave it just as it is.
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